So Far From Acceptable for Me

2 stars for story
.5 stars for narration
Playboy Hot Bod Vampire Gregori has been faced upside the head by the love bug. This bug had a very bad sense of humor, he fixed Gregoi's heart on the President of the USA's daughter. Not the one sen in the media at all the parties but the really smart one who will do anything to save her mother. Bantering, lusting and fighting are sure to come.
I wasn't in like with this edition. First the narration for any of the military men was so awful, whiney weasel sounding voices with a sense of pettiness in their tones. Second this daughter was a manipulator who could only love if he was willing to put all his friends and family on the line for her. Bah that is not over that is control- (hated her for this) Third, why did Gregori fall for her, was I to believe she was good and true ?